Graeme's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Half a collab]

I like it!

You have some really good FBF stuff in there, and seom fo it looked pretty neat. The only reason i docked you any point was because it had no music or sound fx.
I think if only it had a little music and sound, this thing would be awsome.

You definately have talent, we saw that in the Smoking Kills Collab too, if you just apply yourself to bigger projects, you could have some really great work.

PS. I love the thrusting dude that was just always kinda there. Haha

FlashKn1ght responds:

Thank you!

and yes, I do need bigger projamecs.
Actually, I'll let you ina on a little secret.
I'm planning one right now. Nothing "huge" and Its not started either... but it will be.

ooh yes... it WILL be...

[TT: 002 Runner I]

Love it

First off, glad to see this isn't going horribly underrated like the first did.

That was truely amazing. I've never seen an animation with that style. I've seen stop motions, but never with the character trail like that.
How did you postition the paper so the the camera coul scroll across it so well? Was it stuck up on the wall?

Both of you guys have a talent for making excellent music too. It fit it really well, and have a cool beat.
Some of that would have been REALLY hard. Like the transforming driving truck thing. Some really amazing work, and I can't wait for the next installment of twintrash!

Also, on a little side note. I love you guys each have your litte signature thing (.M. and >T) but for this you combine them (>TM.) Not sure if i'm the only who noticed, but cool.

[The Truth About Doom-Fan!]

Lack of effort

It would help if there was some effort involved. You just kinda slapped stuff together. It would help by spending some time, developing a story, and sticking to it.

Also, it's not my place, but i'm pretty sure TTA movies were supposed to be all deleted

Billy-Bean responds:

that was months ago!

[The One Layer Collab]

Not bad

My favorite parts were the parts with the plaid box dude riding all over the place. I could have watched a whole movie of just that.
The very last part was good to, although the explosions were a little corny.

The qaulity of parts also seemed to decline about halfway. Maybe it was just because that second song didn't fit. It was to slow and quite.

Overall I think it was pretty decent. Could have been better. I like your section explaining layers. I think it was really explanitory for those who don't use flash.

Pretty good stuff though. Hope you enjoyed hosting you first collab there Marcy!

[Let's Have Some Fun]

Awsome!

It was so short, yet so funny.
Good use of camera angles and such. Used as much movement and stuff as possible in a short clip like that i suppose.

Not much you can say abut a short clip, but very funny. Well done.
5/5
9/10

[Bytesize Volume One]

Good stuff.

Good choice resizing it. The bytesize is actually rather smaller than that isn't it? Hense the bytesizeyness of it?

But yea, i like your new one. Bringing up that potatoe salad again. but one thing i noticed, is that when he lifts up the potatoe salad, there is nothing holding the board anymore. Haha. Little error there that i found rather funny.

And since this is volume 1, does that mean each time you make 3 new bytesizes you gonna put another of this things together?

JohnnyUtah responds:

i figured nobody would notice...AH WELL.

[gaymovie2.swf]

good effort?

i dunno dude. it seems like you tried to hard. so then i didn't even come out looking like the Awsome style.
the audio was horrible. and half the jokes were Egoraptor's to begin with.
-the poop in the pipe
-the mushrooms being high

i dunno. i didn't really like it.

Horsenwelles responds:

omg.... THIER GOOMBAS! I WAS CARRYING ON THE STORY!!!! oh, and no, he did crap in the toilet, not the warp pipe

[My New Grounds]

High five for you!

this is the most original, most awsome piece of work i've ever seen on NGs in awhile. I enjoyed it sooo much! You sir get 5/5 also 10/10 and a spot on my favorites list!

the self done sound effects reminded me off EdibleCastle movies.

you had some really cool special effects. like your lvl 6 fist thing, the crumpling and throwing the Tom poster, and the submitting your stuff through your desk. everything in this movie was so amazing. i can't stop going on about how much i loved this!

[The Bouncer]

Pretty cool

i've seen lots of odstacle type flashes like this. trying to get past something, or form one point to another. this is one of my favorites.

the voices needed to be loader and clearer. they were often drowned out by the music. and when it says the title, it should be more centred. a real preloader would be nice too ;)

heres my view of all 9 sections
1 (disguise) - kinda boring
2 (batters up) - not bad
3 (sneaky business) - i like it
4 (portal) - my favorite, just went on to long
5 (persuasion) - the funniest one
6 (power of rock) - i like how he just steals it
7 (intimidation) - i like how it had a different view point
8 (town hero) - could barely hear what was being said
9 (secret) - cool, i like the irony

[Giant Pumpkin]

Not bad

I thought it was pretty cool. I ike your giant pumpkin, and his voice. although his cannon thing came out pretty weird. then things didnt end up where he shot them.

i also liked seeing a giant pumpkin smile at a kitten. and squash a hobo. haha.

i agree with RSQViper thing though, that ending yelling thing was annoying.
Anyways, ill go suggest it for the halloween collection.