Graeme's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Prison Planet]

Layout doesn't do it justice

The layout seems kind of off center. As if there is no real focus. My guess if you guys just wanted to make sure that the Newgrounds Tank robot was visible in the top corner :)

Looks very awesome. I enjoy the Tankmen tower in the background.
The colour choices make me relate the art to Gonzossm's style more than your own. I think that feeling mostly comes from the tree colours.

Overall, I think I can sum up my feelings of this art piece in one thought:
Deloreans are wicked

JohnnyUtah responds:

yeah i had to design it with splitting it down the middle in mind...them are the breaks I guess.

[Scarecrow]

Needs a spooky hat :)

Looks pretty cool, but I'm not a big fan of some of the colour choices.
Either the shirt, and sky should be made more sinister, or the scarecrow should be happier.
It just seems like I'm getting mixed messages or something.

The drawing and shading is all very nice thought!
Keep it up man :)

[Self Portrait]

Definately your best!!

Excellent work on the shading!
Looks awesome! Wouldn't hurt to spend some time on a background, even if it's a basic one.

You did seem to miss doing the right eye though. It could use a little bit of light reflection in it as well. Maybe a bit more texture to the eyebrows as well.

You just keep improving though. So congrats there :)
I look forward to seeing you make some more high quality stuff coloured in photoshop like this one.
Keep at it!

fluffkomix responds:

thanks! the eyes are my biggest peeve on this one